Joel Rosen (Co-founder and creator)Mentor
Hi Anna, 
A great start with this brief. I think your overall feel and vibe it portrays is definitely calming, vintage and slightly Italian which works perfectly. What I think would be great however is if you implemented a little more consideration into your letter spacing, padding and overall space across the site. I think your close but there is just a few areas that could do with a touch more space. For example in the footer the menu items are a bit close to the top and bottom of the footer container. Your body text throughout in the sans serif also feels like it has a touch too much letter spacing, I would bring this down a touch and maybe increase your line height a little. Apart from thatI think this is a great job. 
Joel
2 months ago

Anna ManannikovaPREMIUM
Joel 
thank you very much for encouraging words and recommendations. 
It is very important and helpful for me.
I made changes in my full-page design:
- Increased spacings in the footer
- Made smaller letter space of body text in the sans serif. And increased a little line height of this text
- Revised spacing and padding. Especially in Magic Globe block
2 months ago

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