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This is a resubmission of a previous design, it has been totally revamped to have a more elegant appeal, with a more minimalist colour scheme. The free drinks coupon is a perforated circle that can easily pushed out. The glass made up of cocktail names will be embossed and printed with a gloss finish to make it shimmer in the light.
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Invitation to a cocktail bar launch party
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Hi Joshua, this is looking really sleek. Much better suited to the elegant, minimal bar it's for!
There are two things I noticed first off. The first one looks like it might have been done on purpose - the number 2 is way bigger than the 8 and looks like it's a totally different font too as it's got inconsistent weight in comparison. It just doesn't look quite right!
The second is that the font for the cocktail names is way too small, you can hardly read what they say and it wouldn't hurt to give them a tiny bit of padding on top and bottom too so you can see them a bit clearer but without losing the shape of the glass.
My final suggestion for you is to put a crest in your pop out circle. It would be a perfect fit and would suit the elegant theme so well! As well as being an element that the client specifically asked for.
I really like the dark/gold contrast and your idea to use embossed and gloss printing techniques. It would give the whole design a whole new element!
You've created a really well thought out design which meets almost all of the clients specifications. Well done Joshua!