Jess Caddick (Contributor and Mentor)Mentor
....(PART 2)
On the second screen, be careful of spacing between the user avatars and the chat box text! They are almost touching! Also I it may feel more balanced to have the chat box text moved down a little so that it’s central aligned within the light box. I would also perhaps suggest reducing the sizing of the avatar images as they too are almost touch the edges of the box! 
Lastly, the groups title is closer to the chat boxes than to the groups :) look out for spacing here to it could do with being moved down a few pixels :)
I hope this is helpful for now! If you do a revision let me know I would love to see.
10 months ago

Jess Caddick (Contributor and Mentor)Mentor
Hello Stephanie :) thanks for sharing this submission! So a little bit of feedback on the design…the drop shadows I feel are looking a little harsh, have you tried softening them into more of a gradual shadow? perhaps angled slightly? These types of shadows a re quite on trend, you should be able to find reference to them quite easily :) 
So on the first screen, is ‘benefits’ the light blue bubble with the heart? It’s not super clear, I would say perhaps reduce the size of all the bubbles a little to it feels softer on the page, and then place ‘benefits' on the same line as 'learn more', and 'need help’ to create super clear call-to-actions :) if ‘benefits’ is higher up in the hierarchy then perhaps there is another way to display this section? I would say it doesn’t quite work have the ‘benefits’ in the larger font size! ‘Create account’ should be the most important CTA (call-to-action) here generally.
(PART 2 TO FOLLOW...)
10 months ago

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