Flavia Mayer (Designer, tutor & community support)Mentor
Love these patterns Alison! Nice work! Aperol spritz is definitely my favourite.
I have only 3 comments to make:
- On your main image, the mojito can is closer to the left than the right, I'd make sure they 3 cans are equally spaced. Small but important!
- You've used a very light green stroke on the logo and the rectangle circle. I  would try to leave the stroke with the same color as the logo, the green is not used anywhere else I think, it doesn't match the rest of the colour palette that well.
- I think you could play more with the typography you used to write each flavour. I feel it's too much of a standard sans serif font, it could have more impact if the font had a bit more character and still went well with the logo, maybe something bolder and with more space between the letters.
That's it! Just a few touches and voilà. Keep up the good work! ;)
5 months ago

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