Flavia Mayer (Designer, tutor & community support)Mentor
Nice work Julia, love the little illustrations!
I think the main thing you could explore more is the layout. I like the way the ingredients are laid out on the left. I think you can play more with the steps on the right. At the moment they feel very rigid and vertically close to each other, and still you have a lot of area to play with. The central alignment also makes the icons quite small, and they are so nice they definitely could be more of a feature! (I think it would appeal more for someone looking for a recipe as well). Try maybe a irregular grid or even putting the illustrations on the left and number + text on the right.
Another thing I'd play more with as well is the colour palette. I really like the blue and the orange. The step by step icons have a lot of grey in them, maybe you can change the color of the bowl or something like that. The icons on the left look more exciting because they have more color variation. Sometimes I look for colour palettes on Pinterest to have a reference to start with!
The last thing I'd suggest is to also play with the title and logo position at the top. You have a lot of space in between them but they're very close to the top and bottom orange lines. Try to find a more balanced position where both vertical and horizontal margins have the same spacing.
Keep up the good work! Mouth-watering recipe! 🤤
1 month ago

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