Thanks for the feedback, Joel! I'll work on it and upload it soon.
Hey Lena, thanks for your submission here, great to see you've spent the time to put together the different page views and I think with a few tweaks we could help you improve this a touch further. Firstly I really like the simple Aki-To brand concept. I feel like the header and nav placement is a little busy and almost floating too much in its appearance. The gold / brown type over the grey gradient background block is a bit difficult to read, I would remove the background faded block and possibly update that gold colour to something more neutral like a soft grey? I would also suggest that from personal experience the brush script typeface used for the 'Relax, enjoy' could be improved upon - it's an extremely common typeface that you see everywhere and by using this it makes your design not feel as unique and original as it could be. Keep up the good work Lena and I look forward to more submissions from you!
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