Hey Kai, awesome to see your submission here to our invitation brief. This is my favourite submission of yours so far! Your design is looking really slick. Your usage of fonts and flashes of gold here is looking great. Your composition is also very strong. Nice idea also, to include a pop out 'free drink on us' token to the design.
I think that whilst the cut out '82' is a nice touch, it's not very easy to read on the page. I think that you could trial a version, where you make the numbers here lovely, stylish and bold in a gold font, similar to the rest of your designs. At the moment, I think it feels slightly lost amongst the page with the dark card.
I think also with the cut out 'free drink on us' token, it would be interesting to further explore the style of the cut-out, such as developing a more stylised cut out perforated edge right round the pop-out design. I think this will help to make this element of the design look more cohesive.
All in all, this is lovely work Kai. Really loving this design. We're all enjoying seeing your submissions here back at the Briefbox HQ and are looking forward to seeing your next submissions. And remember, if you do choose to work on this design, make sure that you upload it as a separate submission. Keep up the good work Kai!
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