Gill Chantler (Community manager / illustrator @ Briefbox) Hey Chris! Thanks for submitting your work to our pale ale brief. This design is looking absolutely smashing. Great work! I'm loving your use of colour palettes here and lighthouse illustrative detail. The lettering and overall layout is just great. The only comment (again) is that I'd make is to add a little more padding (spacing) between your text. Only slightly. I'd also potentially adjust the blue circular mark, to enlarge it just a bit, and see how it sits on the page. If you have the time, it'd be great to see this design as a range in different colour palettes. You could also change the lighthouse to other similar styled illustrations and keep the type and layout to extend the range. Have a play, have fun with it and see what you think! Overall, this design is really smart. We're all looking forward to seeing what you come up with next here at the Briefbox HQ.