Gill Chantler (Community manager / illustrator @ Briefbox) Hey Lis, sweeeet submission! And awesome to see your first design here as a Briefbox Pro member! I love your use of colour and pattern. Nice reference also to the inspiration in the Ivory Coast. To be honest, this is a really great submission Lis and so I don't have too much feedback. I think your use of fonts is also looking good. I would however, watch the colour and text sizing of the smaller header text as it's a little tricky to read. It would be fantastic to further extend these designs by seeing how these work in a range. If you also had any initial sketches, please do make sure that you upload them, as it's really useful for our design community to see your design work in progress. I think it'd also be interesting to see how these designs could be further explored across a range of different products such as chocolate truffles (which would require a different mock up size) and other brand packaging. This would really help to challenge your design and see how it works when tested out on a number of different mock-ups. Have a play and see what you come up with! Other than this, great first submission Lis. We're all really excited to see your next design work here as a Briefbox Pro member.