Gill Chantler (Community manager / illustrator @ Briefbox) Hey Xavier!! Thanks for uploading second submission to the Helsinki hotel branding brief! This is looking great as an overall brand. Overall, I think that the logo is working well on the page and with the additional brand identity stationery items that you've worked on. Especially the business cards! They are looking really strong. Great work Xavier! Thanks for working on this design and adding mock ups. It's always a good idea to give your prospective clients an idea about how your designs will actually work, across different uses such as business cards and letterheads. I think in order to push these designs forwards, it would be worth exploring an additional colour here, as I think the pink's a great contemporary colour, but it might be nice to see a complimentary piece colour in here as well. All in all, just a small tweak, to fine tune these designs! We're looking forwards to seeing further submissions from you as a Brief box Pro member. Niiice work Xavier.